Review
I thought I'd just make you aware of a small typo in the plot outline. There seems to be a verb misuse in the second paragraph of the outline. "While the police are chasing the criminal, there is a mess at Granny's house evolving Little Red Hiding Hood, The Wolf, The Woodsman and Granny, disturbing the peace in the forest and they are all arrested by theinpatient Chief Grizzly." I believe that the word intended for use (and sense) in this sentence was probably "involved" not "evolved." I also believe the word "inpatient" was likely meant to read "impatient." |
